Pink's Review
::12.19.04::
First Impression - Lots of pictures! “Woah, lots of skin, I think I clicked on the wrong link, am I at a porn site?” - 3/5
Link - Yes! Very easy to find too! On Review page! - 5/5
Layout - I like the pink streamline layout! I do not like the way that the image repeats on your archive page! You should try learning some CSS because there is a way to make the background not repeat! - 20/25
Navigation - Not all that easy to find my way around! It took me a few times of checking out your diary just to find your notes and email! - 5/10
Contact - The only thing I found on your main page was your Guestbook in comments! The notes and email were under your links page and then under your contact page! - 3/5
Extras - Lots of extras! Quizzes, Links, Pictures, Cast page, etc. Can't get bored on this site! - 5/5
Updates - Yes! You update almost every single day, but you need to make a mood picture for every day too if you are going to do that kind of thing! - 8/10
Content - You work hard on your diary! It’s a diary that people will want to read, but you hardly ever write a real entry! Most of your entry’s are hard to understand and they are more like lists rather than sentences! I like a little day-logging even though some may not because I feel that it helps know the person more and makes you want to come back to see what’s going on! - 15/20
Grammar - You miss-spell some things at times! Your entries are not paragraphed right (you paragraph every sentence, but I won't nock you down much on that because I did that in a few entries of mine too)! You tend to make every work it's own sentence which is hard to understand at times- it's kind of like a list!- 8/10
Design - Yes! You created your own layout and did the HTML yourself! Good job! Excellent work! - 5/5
Creativity Bonus - Entries mood with mood-pictures- I like how you do that and how you change it for each entry! Your font is awesome! I congratulate you on not using a default or something that everyone else has! - (+ 2)
Pet Peeves - I hate it when people junk up their site with a lot of picture links from every site they have ever visited in their life! Sorry, but I am a clean, streamline person and don't like stuff looking gaudy! I also do not like how the different pages do not match! Almost every different page on your diary has a different background! - (- 2)
Errors - You spelled Archives wrong on your Archive link! Some of your links to the outside did not work for me! - (- 2)
Favorite Entry - I couldn't really find one, but I'm sure there would be one somewhere!
Comments - You need to make it easier to find your notes and email! You should put your contact link on your main page where your links are listed! It would be nice to be able to see your Guestbook entries, but you must delete them! What’s the point of that? On your contact page, you have your writing on one side and in a bar you have comments and your AIM on the other side! It would look better all on one side! It's hard to read! You should spell-check your entries before adding them! Your older page, Guestbook and main page would be better if they all matched!
Overall - I don’t know how long you have been doing HTML, but so far you are pretty good! I would try learning some CSS though to make your site more up to date! It would be an awesome diary if everything matched better! You need to think of it as a part of yourself and put some of yourself into it- if you know what I mean!
Will I Be Back - Maybe if I become a lesbian!
Total Score - 75/100
You were reviewed by: Robin
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